I love you in the rain
Walking lonely along the boulevard
Gazing at all the passing cars;
The glimmer of neon signs
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I just read this again, and though I already mentioned it, this line ' You know my addiction for extinction And everyway I tried to die; ' is almost enough to make me weep today...probably would if I weren't so numb..anyway, the point is, may we all be so blessed to be able to find such love where they know the worst thing about you, and it's ok...sometimes I wonder if it's real..great writing Uriah! Always, AMberlee
'You know my addiction for extinction' what a lovely line in such an overwhelming poem...honestly, your work lately has been nothing short of brilliant...pen on my dear, sweet poet... Always, Amberlee
Hey Tiger - you're on a roll today! This is so brilliantly pedestrian (i.e. dirty street) , earthy, real! I absolutely LOVE it!
And the poetry of romantic defeat...... .....To relish the journey of splintered thoughts I love these two lines......I love reading your poems Uriah, they are always so vivid.
'My addiction for extinction'.................I like that Uriah. Great image here. Sincerely, Mary
Nothing resembles such work rather the unique aspect...Exquisite work!