Kiss Of Death Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India

Kiss Of Death

Rating: 5.0


As you sow, so you reap"
Bear this advice in mind and keep
Nothing goes in waste
Even if bitter truth remains

Yes do not love much
Beautiful or muscled body as such
It has to go back to original place
To be mixed with soil sans race

Neither is it good to walk with pride
Nor advisable to expose or hide
Both the ways are detrimental
Let us act as human

Show it with no arrogance
People may listen only once
The treasure shall remain untouched
But grave shall be easily approached

Dream about nice companion
That shall be the heavenly union
You shall have heaven on earth
To enjoy beautifully before kiss of death

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2014

As you sow, so you reap” Bear this advice in mind and keep

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2014

San Palad likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2014

good advise sir 26 Aug by David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost) to Kiss of death

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2014

^_^ beautiful 26 Aug by Pika Chu to Kiss of death

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2014

It was just ok jenniej11 minutes ago I liked the fact you believe in love and It's obvious someone once hurt you. Thank you for sharing that poem. It was ok

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 August 2014

Scott Ransopher That was good Hasmukh! 21 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Amitava Sur 27 August 2014

Very well advices being made here, which will surly guide us to lead a happy and peacful life.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2014

great poem Ryan Hall12 minutes ago cool

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2014

Good Muhammad Khalid Khan12 minutes ago Kiss of death Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2014

Fantastic use of rhyming scheme Lilly Bayford9 minutes ago There is a nice rhyming pattern and beat. Be sure to edit in the first quotation mark in the beginning. Yes do not love much is a bit of a confusing line Overall, very good :) Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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