Tears of sorrow ...

I was born in darkness
Tears of sorrow ...
I was born in darkness
Tuesday, June 26, 2007

La Rosa De La Muerte

La rosa de la murete
Es la mas bonita de todas
La negra rosa
el color mas ermosa de todas
La rosa del la noche
El beso que bamos para dormir
La rosa de mi corazon
El lo que queda de mi
Tears of sorrow ...
Juan Olivarez 10 June 2011
Muerte is mispelled, you wrote murete, Hermosa has an h at the beginning, The word bamos does not exist in the spanish language, and your last sentence is complete gibberish. Other than that it's a pretty bad poem.
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