Frist Love Poem by Tears of sorrow ...

Frist Love

Rating: 4.5


When I first met you
You were in my heart
I feel you near me when I close my eyes
Just like a sweet dream
you're always with me
I knew you were in heart all along
Now in the night I know I'm not alone
Because you're always with me
My love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Moon light 17 September 2006

hey your poem touches me... i think it realli touch me

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Moon light 29 April 2007

thnc for yr comment... :) i will try harder :)

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Ken E Hall 26 May 2012

In love well thats the way to think...Because you're always with me My love...in thoughts in dreams... lovely poem...regards

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Romeo Della Valle 24 April 2012

Simple but touching! I like it! I wish I could write as simple as that but I get to deep! I will read some more of your writings later on when time allows me! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Dave Ladaga 24 June 2011

I love your poem.. it touches me..

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 21 March 2010

Teens love is exactly like it…nicely described … Enjoyed…much… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Seema Gupta 21 December 2009

a deep emotional touch ya...keep it up regards

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