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Rating: 4.3

Tears that flow down a river
Those tears that scream to be free
Now left me so hollow inside
Nothing but my cold soul
That lingers in me
Crying for peace
Silently she weeps
Wishing to be free
Tears are easy to let go
But what about my soul?

Will I be a hollow shell?
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ebi Robert 14 September 2011

What sorrow displayed in your diction. Brings out the sincere you.

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Gan Chennai 30 June 2010

If you are too much brooding about sorrow, you will attract more and more of it, at least in poetry.I don't know you are writing these for poetic sake or you feel happy to be sorrow. Any case, it's all mind that makes all these plays. Be watchful!

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Aoi Von Black 18 May 2010

It's what I'm thinking about now...suicide...I wish it was so easy....beautyfull poem...

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Iron Panda 23™ 30 April 2010

: o woahss....i loved it! ! !

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Mia Wells 29 March 2010

i really liked this poem it was a beautiful poem i loved it keep writing millions of more :)

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Ken E Hall 20 December 2009

Sometimes we bite off more than we can chew and ending like this is akin to pointing the gun at all the people you love Tears of sorrrow, but you compel me to read more uavanice xmas regards

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Arabian Heart 25 April 2007

my soul cries for this poem write more please

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Anita Blake 24 April 2007

powerful poem..i really liked it

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