Lady In The Mist - Iii Poem by Alison Smith

Lady In The Mist - Iii

Rating: 5.0


Across the hills
Throughout the lands
An eerie feeling settled
The sound of crying echoed

Would the Knight sense it?
The unrest in the land
Would he find the Lady in the Mist

And what of the Lady, Who was she?
And why had she been trapped for so long?
Surely as no bars held the door
She could walk free.

The Lady in the Mist
Was bound by her own fears
Worthlessness shackled her feet
She did not know how to break free

And why was she surrounded in mist
When all around her was in sun
Was it the tears of her sadness
That made her land that way?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 10 February 2007

Astute quilling....ask the Reader a question...Subliminal participation tickles sweetly! FJR

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David Harris 10 February 2007

Alison, the reflection of the fair ladies lack of self esteem clearly comes through on this one and makes you wonder if the bold knight will rescue her. I loved this part of the quartet. David

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Alison Smith

Alison Smith

Orange, New South Wales, Australia
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