it was a beautiful night
when i was looking into the sky...
what a wonderful sight..!
while walking in my street,
i felt stars were giving me a treat!
they were twinkling on a beat,
a beat of my each and every feat...
i don't know what,
but suddenly that dropped tear
showed me...- my own fear...
a fear because of that noise
that whistling, that horrible voice..
my heart started running fast
and breathes were going stopped....
all the situations were going unedicuate..
then i told myself that now i can't tolerate..1
now stars seems to me, telling me to fight
that beautiful night of mine suddenly changed,,
in horrible night.....
i experianced my fear last night...
You do write well, Shraddha...You just need to be a bit more coherent, that's all...
I understand the plight of a woman at night, its just so sad that this happens in a modern society like we now have. This is a beautiful poem, expressive and true.
Beautiful write on today's situation..Yes, girl or women should be cautious at night...Loved the you wrote.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i thank u all for giving time to my poem.............