Meri Parchhai Aksar Mujhse Poochha Krti Hai

Rating: 3.9
meri parchhai aksar mujhse ye poochha krti hai...
meri kahaani sunkr usse joojha krti hai..
kyu chehre pr muskaan liye tu charon or firti hai,,
fir raat ki ot mei kyu tu aahen bharti hai..
aakhir kyu tu khushi ka jhoota dikhava krti hai...
kiski zindgi ki khatir hr pl tu mrti hai...
meri parchhai aksar mujhse y poochhha krti hai...
sunkr meri kahani usse joojha krti hai.

jisse tu juda hone se drti thi,, wahi tujhse juda ho gya..
jisse saay khti thi,, wahi saya tera kho gya..
tera bachpan to bachpan mei hi kho gyaa....
sunkar teri y kahaani tera saaya tk ro gya..
fir kyu, kyu tu hr wqt khilkhilaya krti hai..
meri parchhai aksar mujhse y poochha krti hai...
meri kahani sunkr usse joojha krti hai...

khud chhipkr roti hai,, sbko hasaaya krti hai..
apni hasi k peeche kyu ankhon ki nami chupaya krti hai..
khush rehne ka nuskha sbko sikhaya krti hai..
kyu hr tkleef sehkar bhi tu muskuraaya krti hai..
apna gam aakhir kyu sbse chipaaya krti hai..
meri prchhai aksar mujhse ye poochha krti hai..
meri kahani sunkr usse joojha krti hai.......

shraddha............
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COMMENTS
Lalit Kaira 03 November 2017
did not heard from you for a long time..............
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Abduhoo Salamath 21 August 2016
wahh...waaahh..kia andaz e bayn hai parchai se aap beeti...bahuth khoob...
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Shivani Gupta 02 November 2013
beautiful poem...keep it up! ! ! You are a great writer...
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Ellias Anderson Jr. 19 September 2013
Well, i think it needs a translation, but as i found from comments, it should be so nice is it written in Indian?
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Tripsha Ghosh 18 September 2013
Hatsoffff Girl! ! ! ! ! u did very gud.I love it
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Neela Nath Das 16 September 2013
khud chhipkr roti hai, , sbko hasaaya krti hai.. apni hasi k peeche kyu ankhon ki nami chupaya krti hai.. khush rehne ka nuskha sbko sikhaya krti hai..- - - - -very profound and beautiful lines!
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Milap Singh 14 September 2013
nice poem................shraddha ji
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Abhishek Mishra 10 September 2013
Amazing poetry which proves that greatness of an true artist is beyond any boundary and language in particular. It has simply mesmerized me, you have a wonderful talent with which very few people are blessed with.....I wish if I could write like this
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Geetha Jayakumar 07 September 2013
Shraddha, aapki kavitha bahuth achhi hai. Loved it. Keep on writing.. But as Dr Library had said an english translation would be better, so that all can understand. Saya humari kabhi peecha nahi choodthi hai woh humare saath me har gam mein ya khushi me saath saath he chalthi hai.
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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 07 September 2013
Great talent in Indian Poetry, emerging to carve a niche for herself in this field... It reminded me at some stanzas, the philosophy of the holy scripture GITA, reflected by the apt metaphors... And to be true I feel these poems should be translated to English, SO that the message can reach to a broader section...
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