A Story Of A Girl Child........ Poem by shraddha shraddha the poetess

A Story Of A Girl Child........

Rating: 4.2

When she was born,, there was no celebration..
even there was a negative situation..
everyone was in sorrow and in tension..
just because she was a girl child..!
don't u think this attitude wild..! ! !

they don't love her,,
they don't even care...
at the same time pampering her brother,,
isn't this is anfair.....? ?
but she know very well life is a game,
and she was a very good player...
she was ready to accept,,
each and every dare.......

she was hopeful that,,
she will be successful someday..
she will deffinately achieve her goal,,
it might be difficult but she'll find a way......
'i just want their love',,,
she always pray.....
she was practicing a lot,,
night and day..

she is also a child of god,,
she is a boon..
at that time they denied,,
but going to accept it soon....

she worked hard and finally she succeeded..
she took her step forward and never preceeded..
last she achieved her goals..
a mom. a sister a wife..she played many important roles...

now proudlyy saying i am a girl child....
a story of a girl child..


dedicated to girl child...
Rajesh Thankappan 01 March 2014

A nice poem with a happy ending. I hope with spread of education people stops discriminating against the girl child.

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Itai Oscar 28 February 2014

Bringing out what is happening in our society.... Great write!

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Suman Kumar Das 26 February 2014

a burning social issue has been pictured in distinctive way.........................liked it, Dear Shraddha! Good job. Keep moving. only suggestion to avoid minor grammatical error. May God always be with you!

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Thomas Vaughan Jones 22 February 2014

Well done girl child. Now you are also a poet. Hugznstuff.

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Prasanna Kumari 21 February 2014

good poem reflecting reality and giving hope.....

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 June 2023

Great Dedication to a GIRL child, so very sad to read these things still happen now in traditional societes, where are The MOTHERS? She was a girl child too. TOP Marks for this brave and beautiful poem

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Prabhat 08 August 2019

Very nice and 💓 touching poem.

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Shruti 18 April 2019

A very real and emotional poem

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Gauri 16 April 2019

Very good

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Ishita 27 January 2019

Beautiful poem

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