Last Night. Poem by Fay Slimm

Last Night.

Rating: 5.0


Last night I breathed an air so rare.

A free-from-panic air.
Intoxicating air.
Such fluffy-white-cloud air.
An ether-thin clear air.
Pure, satisfying air.

Air breathed without a single care,
All because my love was there.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Harris 06 May 2009

Aah, nothing like the lovemaking of a good man to make a woman feel good and all tingly inside, Fay, which is the conclusion I draw from this charming and delightful poem. That warm afterglow of a good loving stays with one for a good while, and makes the anticipation of the next time all that much sweeter! A very beautiful poem, Fay! Carl.

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Arabian Heart 09 August 2008

air in which you speak speaks to me and makes me want to breath all that you breath what wonderful air to breath a poem that touches me please write more

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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