Wednesday, August 19, 2009

Last Night

Rating: 4.9
Nature had pulled the blind
And put on the crescent candle in the sky so we won't go blind.
The wind was dry and frosty
It was subsahara winter not roasty.
The cold made my teeth shatter
And my shoulders shadder.
But my soul was warm.

Under a big neem tree I stood tall,
I stood tall waiting long.
Then I heard the variagated and dry
Crispy leaves suffering a weight cry.
I took one twirl,
And there she stood - my godess.
A few steps and I could see a beautiful dahlia,
A few more and I could touch my darling.
I closed my eyes and tensioned for a kiss which I missed.
I missed a kiss that could quenched my blazing tongues of passion.
Just then I heard her whisper lightly...
'Open your eyes'
When I did...

A dream was my realization
'Cause beside me, there she lay
Glowing brighter than the sun in the dark
And her visage well arced
Separated by a gleaming smile
Carving into her cheek a crater and exposing her teeth
Which embarassed the night stars
Made my blood rush through my veins
With the fury of a zillion streams searching for freedom,
And a consuming sensation
As strong as the earth's foundation.

Now we lay close and near amalgamated.
Her embrace was warm; better than that from my mother,
Her feminine skin was soothing and tender;
Better than the finest satine,
And her sweet scented nature;
Better than the perfumes from all of Arabia.

My greedy hands slide of her shoulders
Down into her gentle vale waist
Right onto those soft semicircles...
Her spartan limbs also curresced mine,
The firm bulbs at whose sight
One remembers baby life also kissed my chest tight.
While my eyes were fixed on her's
Eyes so magical with enough magic to
Seize my breath and petrify my heart
And still give me life.

Then suddenly started quivering,
So I opened my eyes
But she was not there.
Rays of young sunlight streamed into the dark room
And on my bed there was a pool...
A pool of little drops of life.

This event which climaxed yesterday's night
And was the treshold of today's day
Was a dream not a lie.
Kobik William
Rinki Nandy 26 December 2009
it s amazing the way you have compared or combined the beauty of nature and of a woman together.
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Pampero Jadan 18 November 2009
even dreams can be true nice images similie og tree palm and gril well done a perfect poem with good metaphor i liked the nature mixing good dear poet Kobik William
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Charli Pinkney 26 September 2009
'Nature had pulled the blind, And put on the crescent candle in the sky so we won't go blind.' niced image 9/10 (i would give you 10 but i dont realy like love poems in general)
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Kristina B; Williams 19 September 2009
very elaborate, and easily vizualized....had to put myself in the womans' part of the poem though, for i am not a guy, nor do i have a manhood..had to give you a 10, for that poem was so beautiful, and well thought out.. i love a poem in which i can place myself there..thank you
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Khilil Perry 18 September 2009
wow you almost write like me how I write my love poems but yours is different god bless keep writing can't wait till you get a book done
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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 10 September 2009
'Crispy leaves suffering a weight cry'. Excellent! Let all such Romantic dreams come alive. Ten+ dr. sakti
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Paul Cutting 09 September 2009
I loved this poem, your brought me with you on the adventure, Thank you PC
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Nathan Chilton 09 September 2009
in this poem i fell you have put your heart in to this and i like the way you have put it aswel. you have done this beautiful. from nathan c 8+
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Mubeen Sadhika 09 September 2009
Its beautiful. eloquent. nicely penned.
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Zeinab Sherif 04 September 2009
very good work keep it up.10 marks.
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