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Chocolate Cake

Rating: 4.0

I love chocolate cake.
And when I was a boy
I loved it even more.

Sometimes we used to have it for tea
and Mum used to say,
'If there's any left over
you can have it to take to school
tomorrow to have at playtime.'
And the next day I would take it to school

wrapped up in tin foil
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Ashley Hartshorn 07 February 2012

Why is it so long? ? ? D: i was going to use it in a project because i needed other poets work but i dont wanna have to rewrite it

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* Sunprincess * 11 July 2014

...........enjoyed this wonderful poem.....and truly I love warm chocolate cake with honey on top.....

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Kim Barney 07 December 2014

I was chuckling all the way through, because I once did a similar thing myself!

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Hano J. H 09 December 2013

So true, & the humor wowww, i laughed & laughed, i enjoyed it & would definitely share, great work thank you.

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Colleen Courtney 02 May 2014

This is such a wonderful poem! Great visuals it conjures!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 September 2021

A magnificent poem! I have already voted and taken it to my favourite!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 September 2021

I have read this poem before. Have voted with full marks. Chocolate Cake is always a delight! A revisit to enjoy the delicious chocolate poem once again.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 September 2021

A wonderful poem brilliantly crafted. Very entertaining.

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Robert Murray Smith 21 September 2021

A fantastic write. Brilliant!

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Robert Murray Smith 21 September 2021

It reminds me of the fruit cake I was given to take to mum. Guess what it didn't arrive.

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