Lay Still Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Lay Still

Rating: 2.8


I know it is to painful...
Lay ever so..
still if...
I am to see..
Your love as this..when..
It is you..there to lay still..
While I look inside your love..
To know..once and for all..
Who it is that you are..today..
I will need..you still..in love..
As I remove at least one..
Mask...as rose leaves..
From that mirror..
Which clings to your face..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
. . 07 July 2009

In one so many reflections Beware the Fun House mirrors Which is the reality on the move? What does it capture in It's reflection... :)

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Fiona Davidson 23 June 2009

Powerful words IIP....10+++

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Surya . 23 June 2009

vow! beautifull. beautifull lines and strong intent.voted10 surya

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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