Leave People Who Live Life Alone Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Leave People Who Live Life Alone

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Some may say I don't 'NEED'
But that I 'WANT'!
But I know what I need...
And it's you that I want.
If I say it's you that is on my mind?
I know what I'm wanting and needing,
From time to time!

Folks don't have enough to do on their own.
Why can't they leave people who live life alone?
Maybe they are the ones many try to avoid?
But that isn't complete because they are everywhere,
To annoy!
And opinions? Do they have them! Some by the case!
Sometimes whispering...
Sometimes loudly,
But it is done right in your face!
That's the disgrace...
When this is done in a public place!

Some may say I don't 'NEED'
But that I 'WANT'!
But I know what I need...
And it is you that I want!
And I'm not wanting or needing,
Us right now...
To be around them! !
Let's go!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Root 18 September 2006

Hi Lawerence, Very creative poem. Tongue twister poem. Take care Excellent write.

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Kelly Allen Vinal 18 September 2006

Another superlative work, Lawrence. Excellent!

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