JoJo Bean, Dodgy Dave and Meggie Gultiano

Leaving A Party

Leaving a party always makes me sad
Leaving behind all the fun I had
Saying goodnight to all my friends
and the walking home all alone again

All alone, a pain inside
The laughter, the music I want to hide
A burning feeling, deep longing
Ahh, those memories, I want to cling

All those memories that we share
The slow dance and sweet smell of your hair
I hated to leave all the fun I had
Leaving a party always makes me sad

Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 7, 2008
Poem Edited: Thursday, February 7, 2008

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Comments about Leaving A Party by JoJo Bean, Dodgy Dave and Meggie Gultiano

  • Emancipation Planz (2/10/2008 2:39:00 AM)

    If the party brings together.. Peace, partnership and collaboration.. in the form of a Trichotomous writers' celebration, well done and who cares if you leave, I can see there will be reason for a next time... l! ! ! Look forward to more..

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  • Melvina GermainMelvina Germain (2/9/2008 2:34:00 AM)

    this wonderful little poem brings back memories of some parties I attened and just didn't want the evening to end. Another lovely poem for the beautiful trio, Excellent work my poet friends.
    Melvina

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  • Mary Gordley (2/8/2008 12:50:00 AM)

    Sounds like a wonderful party. Now what I want to know is when and where is the next one?

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  • Thad Wilk (2/7/2008 7:15:00 PM)

    A really nice write! pleasure to read! ! Was David last to leave the party? *10*! !
    Friend Thad

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  • Lime and Tequila with a Splash of Pineapple (2/7/2008 9:08:00 AM)

    This has a sweet, gentle rhythm to it that I like.

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