Thursday, February 7, 2008

Leaving A Party Comments

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Leaving a party always makes me sad
Leaving behind all the fun I had
Saying goodnight to all my friends
and the walking home all alone again
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JoJo Bean, Dodgy Dave and Meggie Gultiano
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Emancipation Planz 10 February 2008

If the party brings together.. Peace, partnership and collaboration.. in the form of a Trichotomous writers' celebration, well done and who cares if you leave, I can see there will be reason for a next time... l! ! ! Look forward to more..

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Melvina Germain 09 February 2008

this wonderful little poem brings back memories of some parties I attened and just didn't want the evening to end. Another lovely poem for the beautiful trio, Excellent work my poet friends. Melvina

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Mary Gordley 08 February 2008

Sounds like a wonderful party. Now what I want to know is when and where is the next one?

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Thad Wilk 07 February 2008

A really nice write! pleasure to read! ! Was David last to leave the party? *10*! ! Friend Thad

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This has a sweet, gentle rhythm to it that I like.

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