Left Me In The Mid Way Poem by Amitava Sur

Left Me In The Mid Way

Rating: 5.0


Why did you love so much
When decided to leave in between.
Why did you hold my hands
When decided to forget me.

Loved you praised you
Kept you deep in my heart’s throne.
That heart is struck with so many arrows.
Only blood flows throughout the day
From those wounds of sorrows.

Everything is empty now
With an empty heart and mind,
You left me in the mid way
Playing this hide and seek game.

I cannot love, cannot hold
any other hand and mind
You blocked me and locked me
Even you left me behind.

How I’ll live now,
Even a day but you.
Tell me and show me the way
I’m eagerly waiting to know.
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Amitava (5.04.2014) 9-20am

Saturday, April 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: grief
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Uma Ram 29 April 2015

Heartfelt piece of writing sir. Felt the pain...The very title - Left me in the mid way...beautiful sir. The powerful emotion flows in every word. Thanks for sharing sir.

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Yash Shinde 05 April 2014

.no one should leave you at important steps in your life..this poignant piece, provokes emotions..........lovely

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Roseann Shawiak 05 April 2014

Very heartfelt and sorrowfully intense, Amitava. Great feeling and emotion gripping my heart with your emptiness. Yet with an iota of hope showing through, as you ask to be shown the way to now live and eagerly awaiting the knowledge. Really great poem, you keep outdoing yourself, Amitava. Give you 20 tens. RoseAnn81838

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