Let It Be Forgotten Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Let It Be Forgotten

Rating: 5.0


Let it be forgotten,
as that flame, it just goes out.
May it be forgotten,
as to where my soul,
it went too there and laid before.
Being young, I am old, kind friend
it's time from long ago, I'm here.
There's a song across the sky,
some wait,
as too my long, forgotten snow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 11 October 2009

This reminds me of an old poem I once read; but it is new and fresh, and goes forth on it's journey from where that one left off.

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 11 October 2009

A roar from the lion's den...deep, profound, lovely... A Poet Who Loves To Sing

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Gary Witt 11 October 2009

I like this one. It creates a mood; something not easily done. I particularly like the last few lines. That long-forgotten snow phrase is especially nice. Thanks, G

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From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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