Let It Be Said Poem by suzan gumush

Let It Be Said

Rating: 3.5


Lessons have come too fast and immoral
Tis another day they would like to borrow
The ideas of man
Has distracted and distrubed our existence
And polished up those sins
To make a wrong look right
I will finish my words
And cast out those sins into the night
Let it be said
Let it get into your systematic head
The birds shall lose their wings
And fall down from the skies
As the winds rages through
The day of revelation will come
Thus it is said
The reckoning.....
Immoral issues have blightened our moves
No thanks to those immoral thinkers
We will all pay for this diverse
Let it be known
It will be our children who will be cursed
Let it be said
Know saviour will come
Only those sinners
Will have no where left to run

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jon Ojala 17 January 2008

Suzan, Powerful images, powerful words. We can't escape our own collective actions, nor deny what we have built. We can only work towards righteousness and hope that it is enough to combat those who work towards our downfall. Thanks for the warning! Best regards, Jon

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Nathan Strange 13 January 2007

A prophetical read, futile and frustrating yet depressing and insightful at the same time! I like it.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 12 January 2007

Powerful expression and delivery...Well crafted structure...Epistlesque feel works well, with your choice of verbage...Solid Work, Suzan... ~ F. j. R. ~

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