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All That I Am

Rating: 4.1
All that I've been given
Is all that I am
I am no more than
What I am
Life has been a tease
All I've done is try to please
Still I ask for nothing
Nothing do I want
All I need is a magic wand
To take me out of what I'm in
I don't want to share their sins
All that I am
is who I be
No one ever made me!
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Miss Lavender 20 September 2008
intense poem.. a flow of powerful emotions.. the magic wand reminds me of harry potter.. but the situation is different here.. it's as if u r drown metaphorically and the wand would be the boat or something like that...no one beside u, , it's only u there...very touching poem...thanks
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Oscar Gonzalez 12 September 2008
I LIKe THIS POEm MayBE u FEEL this WAy Or NOt BUt I Do FEEL LIKE THHIS SomEtIMES GOOD TO No SOme ONE ELSE DoES SO to
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Antonio Liao 04 September 2008
yah thou no one is excuse to any mistake others do... still we remain what we are..... i agree.. we want to stand to our own principle, even it hurts other... the most important things is we are strong enough to face any adversities in life... thank you for you poem...you heal the world.. a 10 point
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 07 August 2008
There is everything in nothingness, deep thought... thanks for sharing 10
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 March 2008
yeahhhh... you're what you are.. and be and stayed that way.
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Barry Van Allen 26 January 2008
Suzane, Isn't everyone part of everything that they have ever known, ... more or less? Oh! , sorry... but, you just said that. Are you not molded in that image also and, - - - therefore, made by everything and everyone that you have ever known? B.V.A.
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Angelique' Rockwell 11 January 2008
everything you go through, makes you who you are....this makes complete sense to me-i love it!
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Jurietta Duraan 06 January 2008
I feel as if I have written the lines... it says what I feel sometimes... Beautifull and simple... thank you
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Alii Fenwick 06 January 2008
This Has Insprired Me In Some Unknown way of which im not sure! ! .. Really Gets in to What poems are all about.. i love your style.. Made me think about using different styles in my own writing. Well written.. Like the majority or all your poems :) Original i feel =] x Kind Regards.. Alii x
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Randy Resh 17 December 2006
Magic phrase: 'I Am That I Am'. Appears as if you might have a wand; -) ! Lovely, sublime. -R.
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