Let It Flow... Comments

and who else but my indi (R) a can give music to cocophony of ticking

Time, , the great healer - good write.

Let it flow and it make me go...follow the flow..so short but nice a pleasing verses. Like it_Unwritten Soul

allow time to flow allow thoughts to share allow hands to help allow mind to rest at peace always! !

A perfect poetic accompaniment to the gathering clouds....the monsoon is awaited, almost upon us now, and its thoughts fostered over millennia by our farming forefathers…a beautiful metaphor there…the puddles the mosquito stings…..indiraji you have constructed a time lapse photography and pasted it as a layer onto the deeper mortal worries of flesh and blood. Very tender and nice write…deep and directed too kudos

Nice one!