Leon Gakuo


Let Me In - Poem by Leon Gakuo

I want you to err o the side of caution
Distance yourself from the safety of a risk less life and plunge into an unknown with me
Allow yourself the gift of a broken heart, by giving the opportunity to break it
Meanwhile...
Affect me with your beauty, charm me with your personality
Overwhelm me with your presence, fill me with your essence
Do this slowly then all at once; with the subtlety of a unicorn seen or a Santa on a Christmas eve
And in one swift corruption nay bewitching of the mind spread generously over a dating duration, deny me the very opportunity initially presented.

Topic(s) of this poem: romance

Form: Blues Poem


Comments about Let Me In by Leon Gakuo

  • Chinedu Dike (9/10/2015 7:24:00 PM)


    Lovely poem depicting the alluring power of seduction, well articulated and insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. A good piece indeed. Thanks for sharing Leon. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST. (Report) Reply

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  • Fabrizio Frosini (8/30/2015 11:17:00 AM)


    I see a typo.. but no problem.. your poem is really a very good one.. Thanks for sharing, Leon. Welcome at poem hunter and.. keep on writing (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (8/30/2015 10:19:00 AM)


    A great poem, Leon. Nicely written! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 30, 2015



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