Tuesday, January 13, 2009

Let Me Leave Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let me leave,
Leave to make our lives blissful,
Blissful, the way we experienced,
Experienced too, the uncanny moments,
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Vignesh Ravishankar Shanmugam
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Cherry Sha 02 March 2009

What a stylish pattern.... Lovely!

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Larry Bulot 28 January 2009

I have never read a poem such as the way you have written this one.... truly inspiring....10!

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Sadiqullah Khan 27 January 2009

Very good writing, displaying great potential. Fine stanzaic pattern.10

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Miriam Maia Padua 27 January 2009

great...very uniquely written..SO interesting... originally from you... i like the style of repitition of word...great share...

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sumaira .....ir 27 January 2009

Wow! Excellent poetic form of writin...wonderful poem specially th ending ws awesome... Lov th way u write..10++++

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 27 January 2009

Let me leave...........and live with you.Whatta piece.

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Kesav Easwaran 15 January 2009

leaving to a distance leaving the soul behind...emotions well expressed...impressive write, Vignesh...keep posting poems...10

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Vignesh Ravishankar Shanmugam

Vignesh Ravishankar Shanmugam

Coimbatore, Tamilnadu, India
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