Let me leave,
Leave to make our lives blissful,
Blissful, the way we experienced,
Experienced too, the uncanny moments,
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I have never read a poem such as the way you have written this one.... truly inspiring....10!
Very good writing, displaying great potential. Fine stanzaic pattern.10
great...very uniquely written..SO interesting... originally from you... i like the style of repitition of word...great share...
Wow! Excellent poetic form of writin...wonderful poem specially th ending ws awesome... Lov th way u write..10++++
Let me leave...........and live with you.Whatta piece.
leaving to a distance leaving the soul behind...emotions well expressed...impressive write, Vignesh...keep posting poems...10
What a stylish pattern.... Lovely!