When in search of something I have lost,
Visibility is too low can’t run in the frost,
Repeated efforts all going in vain,
Amused and excited I forget the main,
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So, in your beloved's absence, you have got a lovely companion! Her influence seems to be so strong in you these days! Each day, you seem to enjoy her sweet company! The new poems coming one after another like hot cakes is sufficient proof of it! Great write Akhtarji! Top marks!
Oh! Valsa, once again teasing, my new friend is my poetry, I have personified it as a teen aged girl. Probably it's a psychological complex with me. When I was married my wife was in her teens and I could not forget beauty of a teen aged bride. I think anyone who is lucky enough to get a teen aged wife can never for forget the charms of the teen age.
Oh! What a great write it is. Thrilling expression with marvellous phraseology. The lovely lines for me are ....I started thinking like a youth in twenties, Nothing found changed in appealing beauties, Butterflies still fly and fairies still dance, Birds still sing lovely lyric of romance. ...wife is always ever green in the eye of a loving husband. thanks for sharing. .....10
Sometimes poetry calls you, like the beauty of a young woman. And desiring to possess the beauty, you run to it like a loyal dog. Marvelous my friend!