Do not be surprised
As it has comprised
Many ways to disregard
If intentionally looked forward
I observed with keen interest
And served with best
But what happened in return!
My comments dashed against wall in turn
Well, the right attitude will be
Not to think much and feel free
Yet that thought did not cut much ice
I forgot my commitment with promise
Some of the writers/poets feel
They can be at liberty to fill
The void with little connivance
You do for me and I do for you with chance
Even if we lift the golden page from nature
It will speak of no such pressure
You throw stone at tree
In return, you may get fruit for free
Let poets speak themselves
And simply behave
With greater realization
That it needs much more for foundation
UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur 670307 Aug 26,2014
Nice composition! Especially the lines - You throw stone at tree In return, you may get fruit for free are wonderful to read! 18 minutes ago by T A Ramesh | Reply
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Hasmukh Bhai, the following line I liked very much: You do for me and I do for you with chance. Certainly composing poems has become some sort of cooperative movement. KH Prabbu, Kumta, Karnataka - 58134 Aug 26,2014