Let's Be Together Poem by Sam Sam

Let's Be Together

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Let our destinations unite with our ways
Let's be together, now and always

Let our souls meet on a mountain top
Let's be alone like a singularity dot

Let the sky smile when of you I take a sight
Let's laugh at the end of a meaningless fight

Let me clean your glasses for you
Let's see the world with each others' eyes

Let me pledge my skin and bones for you
Let'ssee as all the lies come true

Let me carry the weight on your shoulders
Let'sbuild each other like Bob the Builder

Let me untie knots of your mind
Let's not push ourselves in an endless grind

Let's never end this resuscitating dream
Let's just eat together, your favourite ice-cream

Let our nights be bright as our days
Let's be together, now and always

Wednesday, June 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
The Muse 27 June 2018

That is beautiful Sam

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Chinedu Dike 01 March 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. Very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing Sam.

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Naila Rais 03 July 2018

May your wishes come true... A lovely deck of words.. Thnx so much for sharing...10 Naila

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Sam Sam 05 July 2018

thank you so much!

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Hira Akhtar 28 June 2018

Oh! written for your wife, really sorry! I misunderstood entirely, didn't know you're married.Anyways, Happy writing Sir!

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Sam Sam 28 June 2018

Haha! I'm afraid it's not for my wife as I'm not married either. If that's the reason for deleting your comments, I think that you can restore them😅, and I'll go along with the result that I need to learn more about love to write an appropriate poem.

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Hira Akhtar 28 June 2018

Well, I'm really sorry actually I don't know what made me to comment here as I didn't want to interfere.Everyone has freedom of thoughts and writing!

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Sam Sam 28 June 2018

There's nothing to be sorry about; your suggestions are always welcome. I was just trying to clarify any misunderstanding. I really wanted to know whether it was an appropriate poem or not. I'm always open to learn. Thank you!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 June 2018

Sam, such a lovely poem👍👍👍

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