Let the earth say
Something about life.
So many words are there
With the sky.
And lightening all
The birds fly.
Dear, please stay together
Till the air close eyes.
A very thought-provoking poem, Sir! But you wrote an excellent poem about nature. Thank you for sharing
utterly lovely--I understand the difficulties in translating from native language to another--but sometimes the translation adds to the charm of a poem... five star poem
But I couldn't make out how the air can close eyes? I have to thoroughly grasp what the poet intends to express in the last line.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Stay together is a good message.Impressive.