Let Us Rise Up Like Brave Men Poem by Charles Chaim Wax

Let Us Rise Up Like Brave Men

Rating: 5.0


I walked into Navin’s room
my sister’s son from her first marriage
which ended after eleven years
because Herbert refused
to refrain from picking
his nose in public. “It’s my finger.
It’s my nose, ” he often said.
When my sister filed for divorce
he straight-away
bought a dozen handkerchiefs,
but by then it was far,
far too late.
Navin asked me
if I wanted to trade his old radio which he had sold me
for his new one
since the new one played like shit,
his words.
I said, “You must live with your choice—
there’s no other way.”
“That’s how a Guru talks, ” said Navin
to his friend, Michael,
then both twelve year olds laughed.
While they laughed I sprinkled fish food
into Navin’s fish tank
and eleven tiny creatures swam upwards,
opened their mouths,
and gobbled the flakes.
“Expound on what you have just witnessed, ” I said.
“Use words for normal people, ” replied Navin.
“Of course, whad ya just see? ”
“You fed the fish, ” said Michael.
“A correct observation,
but what does it mean with respect
to your life? ”
“Gurus are like that, ” said Navin,
“they can only talk to other Gurus.”
“It means, ” I said seriously,
“that fish want to survive
and you wear your father’s underwear—
shit stains and all.”
“MA, MA, ” screamed Navin.
“What’s the matter? ” asked my sister rushing into the room.
“Uncle Steve’s a nut.”
“THAT I knew before you were born, ” she said,
“tell me something new.”
“SPEAK
SPEAK NOW, ” I bellowed.
Navin said, “C’mon, c’mon.
pop your fuckin’ psycho pills already
my head’s hurtin’.”
then he laughed
the sound the same as Herbert’s
so I whispered, “No escape.”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina PrettyBrownEyes 20 December 2005

your poems are so much fun to read- the way you encorperate dialoge into it is amazing, it really brings the poem to life. i just wish i was smart enough to get all of the 'deeper meanings'. i can sense that they're there..oh well..a few more years maybe..

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... ... 20 December 2005

this is one of the best poems you've posted on here, you have a great knack of fleshing characters out with little side stories and sub plots like yesterday i enjoyed the one with disabled guy with the neck by the window in the diner and you mentioned the weather and all and really set a scene but you introduced it all matter of fact and often through dialogue so the scene is effectively unfolding in an organic way, and in this way i feel you've arrived at a very constructive way of building your poems.

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