Sunday, December 10, 2006

Lets Make Love Comments

Rating: 4.0

Let's make love like the very first time,
No past, no rush—just you and I.
Come closer, let my silence speak,
Let me show you the thoughts I don't say, but feel this deep.
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Daniel Chapman
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Damian Gile 05 March 2019

Awesome u did good this is AWESOME

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Emma Woods 16 August 2008

beautifully passionate

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Moana Tuigamala 21 April 2008

this one is quite catchy and very emotional. I liked it and it was a great poem, too.

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DaLovely One 03 April 2007

Awww.....this poem is making me blush: -) I really like the way it flows.

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Tania Hernandez 15 December 2006

GREAT POEM SHAME IT DOESN'T ALWAYS HAPPEN THAT WAY(LOL)

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Patricia Gale 10 December 2006

The beauty of love making you have penned so well...

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