Liberty And Freedom Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Liberty And Freedom

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Who enjoys real freedom?
The answer may be “seldom”
What does liberty mean to many?
No one may be able to answer really

Many in rural areas are still ignorant
They are unaware of the situation at present
It leads them no where for the want of square meal?
It is real worry they bothers them to feel

Rich becomes rich day by day
Poor becomes poor in any way
Rich may afford any kin d of luxury
Where as normal man may suffer and worry

Liberty and freedom should go together
Where as it has become alien word altogether
Liberty and freedom is word on paper
Many people still languish and are poor

The rules are there to protect people
Where as there remain still big hurdle
On their way to feel secure with safety
Women are still unsafe and pray almighty

We suffer and lack basic culture
What makes us to go wild from kind nature?
Why not we tolerate little freedom?
Women need them at place of work and at home

No one objects for their richness
But let the poor have some shine on face
Let some basic amenities made available
The corruption and cost should not add to their troubles

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 December 2013

Nice job Charles Mcdowell10 minutes ago I enjoyed reading this, keep up the great work. Comment 0 Thank you for reminding me

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 December 2013

Michael Nappi7 minutes ago That liberty is being assaulted all over the world not just here in the states by Obama

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 December 2013

...oh my... Nathenial Jones10 minutes ago ...you gave up on that last verse...wow...you had me...smile...nj Comment +1 Thoughts true

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 December 2013

John t Greeley9 minutes ago Each complaint and criticism is right in, but the flow is not there. either try to soften the flow or make the anger SHOUT brother.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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