Life! Poem by Ameera Shah

Life!

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Life is a sea
with tides too high
Shells are love
And the sand is lie
Pretty looked the rises
so did the sunset
but deep down there
t cried for its fate.
For the waves kept moving
cause it promised won't cry;
some reached the shore
and some left by..
sea have heart
water it is called,
strong yet soft
rustling yet calm!

Tuesday, February 23, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,peace
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 02 March 2016

Insightful train of thought that depicts the 'ups and downs' of life, well articulated and nicely penned in poetic diction with conviction. To envisage life without difficulties is an existential absurdity. Lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Ameera. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Dutendra Chamling 23 February 2016

Sea have heart water it is called Beautiful poem.........................!

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Dutendra Chamling 23 February 2016

Beautiful poem.........................!

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Ameera Shah 23 February 2016

Thank you Dutendra! Am glad m here..You guys are such a encouragement!

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Aarzoo Mehek 23 February 2016

That's what life is all about...rough sometimes quite, calm and serene. beautifully portrayed emotions.10

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Ameera Shah 23 February 2016

Your comments make me sparkle babe! : *

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