Life Poem by Elias Uddin

Life

Rating: 4.9


Sitting on the chair,
The little baby fair
Tinkers with his hair,
Dreaming in morning's glare.

Walking in the garden
With trees fruit-laden,
Parents give a smile-
Lively and worthwhile.

Sitting on the bed,
Bending down his head,
Grandpa's lost in thought
Over battles fought.

Saturday, September 14, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: battles,parents
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Md Ohee 16 December 2014

true child life story

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R.benjamin Abate 14 February 2014

Grandpa's lost in thought Over battles fought. Nice write.

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Roseann Shawiak 16 December 2013

Nice rhythm throughout poem, I like it. All about life in a short poem. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Mohammad Zafar 14 September 2013

Nice! I like the poem, because it reminds me of the reality of life and I visualise myself as an old man. Finally, we have to leave this world.

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Hans Vr 14 September 2013

Excellent poem; what a great start! Keep on writing, Elias

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