Life Poem by Liam Flaherty

Life

Rating: 5.0


Salty, sweet, spicy, sour
Throughout my life I will devour.
I share, take,
laugh, cry.
The endless meal
that is my life.
But if I was to choose my dish,
And pick my meals from the list,
I would not go for the pleasant food.
Rather spicy and bitter,
than sweet forever.

Monday, June 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 02 May 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Liam Flaherty. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 27 June 2018

Sad emotions are well expressed in this sound poem.10++ You may like laying a comment on my poem entitled, Life is a Choice.

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Chinedu Dike 13 June 2018

A work of an intricate mind written with clarity of thought. Poignant rendition of words with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing Liam.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 June 2018

Liam, such a great write👍👍👍

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Robert Murray Smith 11 June 2018

A good effort. Welcome. ++10

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