Life And Love Fire Poem by jodlizbeth dominic

Life And Love Fire

Rating: 4.8


Tears of love
Tears of pain
Tears of sharing
Calling life.
Love the theme
Have to play with
What is called
Living for giving
Living for gaining.
In behind Love
Feelings come with
The loss and gain
Hate and anger,
As the loss and gain.
Devotion and sacrifice
Starts with love
Bird sharing food
From the beak
Mother caring her child
Father also desiring
Lovewill get back.
Couples?
Give and take
Friend's love
Give and take
Love, filling there all
With boost to live
Throughout nurture
And enjoying it
Up to reaching that
Neverpinnacle
Exists only motion law
Equally take and give
The most wanted love
Prudence for giving
Quits blasts of quarrel
Bombardment of unity
Act as fire for burning
Deeds conflicting real love.
…..............
-jokudengpoms2018

Wednesday, February 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 20 December 2019

A poignant rendition well articulated and nicely brought forth with conviction. An insightful philosophical work of art. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 October 2018

The loss and gain Hate and anger, As the loss and gain. Devotion and sacrifice Starts with love..conflicts, fire, love, hatred, life........ so many points packed u p in this beautiful philosophy. thanku dear poetess. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 21 February 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Jodlizbeth. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.

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Gajanan Mishra 14 February 2018

real love is eternal, right

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Jodlizbeth Dominic 14 February 2018

'Love the theme we all are playing differently totally call life, which we have to handle with care till the pure love come up to pinnacle, that may sacrificing and divine.'

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