Life, Dreams, Reality Poem by Robert Trew

Life, Dreams, Reality

Rating: 5.0


Born to be free
Born to be the one
To do more than agree
But never be out done.

I dream of magic
I dream of you
A life less tragic
A dream to pursue

Know I won’t be left behind
Know that time moves to fast
Enough, for a future for me to find,
Not enough, to forget about the past.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jonathon Agee 09 July 2008

nice poem. love the style. the emotion seeps through into the crevices of the reader's heart. Something seems off though, i can't place my finger on it. Last stanza. Not to sure, check it out, no? anyways, whether you do or not is your choice and either way your poem is awesome, not meaning to degrade the work with such a common word full of nothing more than un-knowledgeable figures that loom in one's own mind. Thanks for the idea, lol. That which looms in one's mind. I'll make a poem out of that. lol.

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