Life In The Trenches Comments

Poem was very nice and inspiring for me as well A

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Very well written. Why should we fight in no man's land? Is it not better to share land and resource and live in peace? ! Aren't we brothers in humanity and God's sons?

this puts you into the foxholes of war. very good write.

you paint a realistic picture

really nice it just keeps getting better and better :)

Very descriptive poem Dan! You take us to the battlefield! The quelling of one's fear is so well described...the need to continue, despite everything going on around this soldier, is very well depicted! Great job! Hugs, dee

Nice write, WWI scenario i should i guess, right? Very Good Write! ! I liked it because it was real episode of life itself, for it was all but deadly and dangerous living in the trenches.

I love the concept of soldiers belonging in no man's land, or is it every man's land?

Very good. It removes the glamour of war and replaces it with a much truer picture. Keep writing Ron

This is amazing! i love it! it's great! i really truley love it. keep writeing, ur very good! - angelica

I truely love this! ! ! Honestly it makes me feel like I'm right there in battle along side some of the best. truely amazing! ! !

i like it cuz life is exactly like trenches. there is drama (bombs) , enemies (enemies) , fights (war) , and there will be atleast one person that will die of different things. and drugs or something else that is very different would to me be no man's land because you never kno wat could happen