Life Is Always ….. Poem by SALINI NAIR

Life Is Always …..

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Seems to be in a contradictory field
There shadows groom alone
Solitude shades as a burglar
There hymn the truth of life

Extolled the beauty with full heart
Adoration that pert inside
Feel that never withdraw anyway
Beat in the dreams as a jingle

Mesmerized in a courtyard
Obliged for that love's track
Solitude that dripped someway
Embrace the dreams with all lust

Seems to be in a heavenly yard
Life that never slide outside
Endurance that mint in love
Precious and pious always

Time departs one arrogantly
Ended the love as a loser
Still torture with all vigor inside
For an unknown resided silently

Mind withdraws as a loser
Never embrace it in solitude
A silent corpse for all time
On the contradictory course of life! ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved

Tuesday, December 2, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We love someone with whole heart.. …after death we don't preserve or like it anymore…..then who we loved …the real unknown…..a contradiction of life….
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 02 December 2014

great writing and ending para felt it more interesting for recitation and to thoughtful feeling it made.

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Heather Wilkins 03 December 2014

deep thoughts about life. mind withdraws as a loser never embrace it in solitude a silent corpse for all time

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 03 December 2014

Very insightful and crafted beautifully to bring home the point.....the contradiction of life as spelt out in the poem.........amazing write

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Akhtar Jawad 03 December 2014

Mind withdraws as a loser Never embrace it in solitude A silent corpse for all time On the contradictory course of life! ! ! ! A thoughtful poem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 03 December 2014

As a whole best poem and very interesting Thank you

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 02 December 2014

great writing and ending para felt it more interesting for recitation and to thoughtful feeling it made.

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