Life Is Constant Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Life Is Constant
Pain and anger are no good managers
It has only one appetite that is hunger
Pain eats up conscious
Anger keeps you in turmoil continuous
As love and hate are exactly opposite
Both of the things actually delight
As day ends with good night
Night brings morning light
Men and woman are two wheels
Children form axis and act as an axel
Life is incomplete without single factor
We are merely here to perform as an actor
They are all two sides of the coin
Attached to life as main
Is there any use to shed tears?
One must understand and try to live without any fear
Life comes first and death later
We may become lover or hater
Still life may move on
Either with smile or groin
It may take only few second
To become drop of water in pond
As bubbles appear and disappear
Life is constant and remains in gear
Pain and anger are no good managers It has only one appetite that is hunger Pain eats up conscious
Cool Ziggy ZiggyLess than a minute ago Wow, Impressive sir, good stuff. I like the ending alot.
Kati Arana likes this. Scott Ransopher That was good Hasmukh! 16 minutes ago · Unlike · 1
Feelings Bobby Childress52 minutes ago The poem conveys the negative aspect of anger, and hate while indicating that love an hate are exact opposites. Comment +1 great!
two sides to life Shana Walker51 minutes ago I get that you are trying to compare and describe the good and bad in life, but in some parts you lost me. Its has good potential though, i like where it was going
Needs more work Hashan Mannan40 minutes ago No clear and well expressed theme or story. For instance - 'It may take only few second To become drop of water in pond' What does it mean? Again - 'As bubbles appear and disappear Life is constant and remains in gear' What relation between bubbles and life here? Punctuation are also required. Comment 1 Comment0 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago Birth is taking place out of 5 elementsi.e body is made of earth, fire, air etc and after death it merges with same.. means going back to oirignal place... in seconds it will become drop means it will again go backk to its origin that is pond..... life is of and off in universe meaning howmany may be taking birth daily and vanishing in..... it is clear dear, , jsut philosophy well established
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Pain and anger are no good managers It has only one appetite that is hunger Pain eats up conscious