You secured a dozen comments
on just a single poem
but that is insignificant
do you wish to reach
the far distant horizon
in a small dinghy boat
incredible it appears so
do create more butterflies daily
then see how bees come to thee
I love so many lovelies
fleeting about me
and O my
their fragrance inspires me
I compose a dozen dozen or much more
so many gather around
sweeter than sweet smelling honey
so it helps me
to sleep soundly
I dream more
and
compose on my laps top
in the morning nothing is found
but a few dew drops
I wake up and recall one or two
I send them across to you
Me Poem Part second
My life is a poem
know allthee
Oh poets of PH so lovely
come along with me
into the jungles
we will walk silently
just hold my hands softly
but firmly
I tend to fall
owing to physical imbalance
so come abide with me
the jungle is half way only
then as we continue to walk further
back we will come to square one
into this smashing lovely world
from where we had just begun
we shall also finally end
Just reading your poem
I have found
I too am a Poem
as my life is also one
all love to read
my life's book wide open
do create more butterflies daily then see how bees come to thee Yes, poems are like lovely flowers of beauty and fragrance that attract butterflies and bees! So let us create more and more poems that readers will swarm around us like bees around lovely blooms!
do create more butterflies daily then see how bees come to thee Yes, each poem is a lovely flower of beauty and fragrance that attracts many to come around us like bees are attracted to blooms. So let us keep penning more and more poems! Those who can see life as a lovely poem are indeed fortunate! Loved your beautiful write! A 10
Poem and the note is very very unique and great..Life is mysterious and so it is so beautiful..like a poetry or like an unknown music...
and again dear young one on your loveliest love poem I am quite sure she now trudges along side with you go the the jungles in silence as I always do now you two I abandon the jungles for you love be in the air for only two both of you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
And we were there Walking along with you in the jungles of silence From where you weaved this beautiful poem. Full of life....(10++++) .
beautiful sweety KD and thanks for also the 10 plus