Nasarudheen.P. Parameswaran

Silver Star - 3,147 Points (8.8.1952 / Manakad)

Life On Rail - Poem by Nasarudheen.P. Parameswaran

Dear, I fear of sin; I sense,
Open mouth in real repentance
By word or deed, if hurt you, please
Pardon by name of the Lord to ease.
Why you tell me you cannot hold
Never I tell that fail you hold
Repentance vents pent up tension
Pardon softens the hearts' friction.
You the rail frail, where we two rail
Your own terminal is my trail.
When with heavy load I move ahead
Under control your guidance red.
When you heave; or break in strain
I too feel hard lurching by crane.
So far straight you are, Oh! never
Creak my wheels at bending dear
Life is a leaf on stem you know
Rustling tender in breeze below.


Comments about Life On Rail by Nasarudheen.P. Parameswaran

  • Valsa George (2/25/2013 10:05:00 AM)


    'Repentance vents pent up tension
    Pardon softens the hearts' friction'...... very meaningful lines! .
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  • (1/24/2013 10:53:00 AM)


    This is a nice rhythmic and rhyming poem.Loved it THANKS. (Report) Reply

  • (1/22/2013 5:01:00 AM)


    Beautiful lines; enjoyed reading the poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 19, 2013



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