Raymond Farrell

Gold Star - 26,421 Points (02/09/1954 / Perth, Ontario)

Life Passes - Poem by Raymond Farrell

Life passes
In spring
With excuberance and force
Like icy water
Gushing through a culvert
In summer
Like hot sand
Through the fingers
In autumn
A hesitant trickle
After summer's heat
In winter
Unseen slowly moving
Beneath the ice
Or with the fury
Of a blinding blizzard
Life passes.

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/8/2015 10:03:00 PM)

    Life passes in spring and in many seasons according to change of style of nature. Life is very adjustable. This is a very worthy composition shared with wise expression of emotion...10 (Report) Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (11/2/2015 11:47:00 AM)

    Amazing similes! Very well done (Report) Reply

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/2/2015 9:08:00 AM)

    it's commentary on life we- composed poem, i like it, thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 2, 2015

Poem Edited: Monday, November 2, 2015

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