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Tonight As I Sit Under The Locust Tree

Rating: 4.8
As I sit
Under the locust tree
Letting my dinner digest
The soothing song
Of the birds
In the bamboo
Is briefly interrupted
By the long loud ring
Of an electronic bell
And hundreds of Chinese students
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Saturday, April 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: commentary
Tapan M. Saren 24 April 2017
I like the vision here....
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Pijush Biswas 07 April 2016
The imagery is vivid, has a clue to extreme performance. well read, thanks
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Jr Cuyam 30 September 2015
I love the way you do it. I like your imagery
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Nel Omofolarin 05 August 2015
Smooth imagery...beautifully crafted
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Kewayne Wadley 14 June 2015
I love the frantic calmness you've invoked. The usage of visuals that Speak flowing down stream. Thank you for sharing
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Raymond Farrell 15 June 2015
Thank you for your very insightful comment.
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Lyn Paul 03 June 2015
Extremely calming, presented so beautifully.
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Raymond Farrell 03 June 2015
I appreciate you comment and you taking the time to read my poetry.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 April 2015
Very nicely and aptly presented. Excellent collocation. A beautiful poem I like most. Many thanks for sharing. .....10
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Raymond Farrell 28 April 2015
Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. I appreciate it.
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 27 April 2015
Remarkable and very vivid observation excellently expressed. It is true that the Chinese are never really expressive of their emotions and usually appear solemn and detached.
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Raymond Farrell 27 April 2015
I am glad others have observed this as well as me.
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Gajanan Mishra 25 April 2015
devoid of expression, I like it.
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Raymond Farrell 25 April 2015
Thank you for your comment I appreciate it.
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