The paradox of people who write
and paint and compose symphonies
is that the world around them
sometimes can’t compete
within the world inside them.
“I’ll go for a walk, ” she says
or “I’ll climb a tree to see the view, ” he proclaims.
But she has already recorded each step
and he has captured the distant mist
and the orchres and greens of the aspens
in the sun, first on the canvas of his mind,
then on the medium.
Are there persons, they wonder,
who do not experience this yearning to capture,
to elaborate, to elucidate,
to captivate?
Once she left her notebook at home.
and he his sketchpad,
and saw the world for once without filters,
without commentary.
“Too scary, ” she said.
“The colors are all wrong, ” he proclaimed,
and they hurried home
to transform it all into art.
Love this. Honestly, if you left the last four lines off when you posted this piece, I think I would have filled them in in my head. Indeed! The vast majority, if not all, of my favorite poets, painters and composers were/are considered mad, neurotic lunatics - most spending time in an asylum or therapy of some sort, many having disposed of their own life. Personally, I'd argue that THEY were the sane ones... suffering only from their extraordinary, painfully precise awareness. Terrific piece! This is a meal for a hungry mind. ~Christine
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the poem is so well commented by Christine….yes the inner world prepares a blue print already to what the external is all about…a deep structured poem…artistically composed…