Light Poem by hafsa fellag

Light

Rating: 5.0


TIRED OF THIS DARKNESS I AM SEEKING A LIGHT.A GLEAM TO CARRY ME TOWARDS SUN.TO A WORLD MADE OF HAPINESS AND FUN.A PLACE WHERE ALL COLOURS ARE BRIGHT.THERE I WILL SEARCH FOR SOME LOVE MELODIES.TO COMPOSEA SONG OF HEAVENS.SING IT WITH NIGHTINGALES AND RAVENS.ANGELS WILL HEAR IT AND SING FOR US THEIR SYMPHONIES.THERE I WILL PLAY WITH SQUIRRELS.DANCE WITH LIONS AND FLY WITH EAGLES.AND AS A MOTHER DOES WITH HER BABY.I WILL GIVE EACH ONE A BEAUTIFUL DAZY.AMONG THE GREEN MEADOWS.I WILL BLIND A HOUSE WITH RAINBOWS.FROM THERE I WILL DOMINATE MY TOMMOROW.I WILL BANISH EVERY SADNESS AND SORROW.ASA BETTERFLY AS A TULIP AS A DOVE.I WILL STRONG ENOUGH AND CAN LOVE LOVE

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 12 May 2009

A soft and lovely poem. You have used nice imagery. 'ASA BETTERFLY AS A TULIP AS A DOVE.I WILL STRONG ENOUGH AND CAN LOVE LOVE' My love with my 10.

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the light in your poem is so radiant and it is spectacular! marvelous work!

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ata khan 04 May 2009

This is an excellent thought, written beautifully. If everyone thinks like this then we do not need to go far away in search of this peaceful land that you portrayed, but this earth will become the land of our dreams. Thanks a lot for writing and sharing this one Hafsa i give it a 10

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