Light Comments

A soft and lovely poem. You have used nice imagery. 'ASA BETTERFLY AS A TULIP AS A DOVE.I WILL STRONG ENOUGH AND CAN LOVE LOVE' My love with my 10.

the light in your poem is so radiant and it is spectacular! marvelous work!

This is an excellent thought, written beautifully. If everyone thinks like this then we do not need to go far away in search of this peaceful land that you portrayed, but this earth will become the land of our dreams. Thanks a lot for writing and sharing this one Hafsa i give it a 10