I hear the rain going
thump thump thump
on the window seal
as i look out the same window
i see a lightning bolt of
blue show in the sky
i hear a thump thump thump
on the door
as i opened the door i
see a man dressed in blue
and i knew something bad had happened
sweetness :) :) ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! nice job! ! :)
lightning is fun to watch.....unknown ppl appearing at ur door...well thats a problem o.o i liked this....alot! ! :)
Very nice poem. Its kinda like one of those things like HEY whats gonna happen! ? lol =P 10!
nice poem =] kinda leaves you guessing at the end a little bit.
yet interesting and beautiful too, i do revel,10+++, thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a ver strange poem but very secret i like it