Lost(The Vampiric angel)

Light In The Sky

I hear the rain going
thump thump thump
on the window seal
as i look out the same window
i see a lightning bolt of
blue show in the sky
i hear a thump thump thump
on the door
as i opened the door i
see a man dressed in blue
and i knew something bad had happened

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 21, 2009
Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 21, 2009

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Comments about Light In The Sky by Lost(The Vampiric angel)

  • Iron Panda 23™ (2/11/2010 8:47:00 AM)

    lightning is fun to watch.....unknown ppl appearing at ur door...well thats a problem o.o
    i liked this....alot! ! :)

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  • Sarah Reamey (12/16/2009 12:32:00 PM)

    Very nice poem.
    Its kinda like one of those things like HEY whats gonna happen! ? lol =P
    10!

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  • Halana Williams (12/15/2009 10:25:00 AM)

    nice poem =] kinda leaves you guessing at the end a little bit.

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (12/11/2009 9:51:00 AM)

    yet interesting and beautiful too, i do revel,10+++, thanks for sharing

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  • Emma Smahlt (10/20/2009 8:43:00 AM)

    well done! ! great job! ! !

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  • Disturbed angel in a straight jacket (10/8/2009 11:58:00 AM)

    sweetness :) :) ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! nice job! ! :)

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (10/8/2009 11:21:00 AM)

    nice descriptive poem, thank you for sharing

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  • Hazel Hale (9/26/2009 8:30:00 AM)

    a ver strange poem but very secret i like it

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