Lost(The Vampiric angel)


My Moon - Poem by Lost(The Vampiric angel)

In your poem you declare me your Sun
in mine you'll be the Moon
for that simile is truelly us two
We're on opposite sides of the world
everyday it slowly twirls
and we get a small glimpse as we go our way
I look forward to it each day

In any aspect that you need me
be it friend or be it lover
I'll do all I can for thee
for it is up to us two
to do all we can do
to be all that we can be

For months now have we've played this game
some others might find it a bit lame
but I've found in you a kindred spirit
I know that has no equal merit
In all that we've been through
all the folks we've talked to
there's always time for us two

I hope the day never comes when we need to part
But fear not! You're already in my heart.


Comments about My Moon by Lost(The Vampiric angel)

  • (3/7/2010 2:58:00 PM)


    I read this and it felt you had written so naturally and freely, a very beautiful poem (Report) Reply

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  • (3/5/2010 10:28:00 AM)


    Very nicely written loved it....one of the best that I've read =) (Report) Reply

  • (3/1/2010 10:08:00 AM)


    you used the word lame in your poem. im always to scared to use words like that because i think people will think its immature but it actually works out quite nice. this poem is beautiful i really like it (Report) Reply

  • (2/22/2010 9:38:00 AM)


    One word to say
    Beautiful....
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 11, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, February 22, 2010


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