Lost(The Vampiric angel)

Was It All Lies

was everything u told me a lie
all the I LOVE YOUS,
The I WANNA BE WITH YOU FOREVER,
and even theI WANNABE THERE FOR YOU
WHEN YOU NEED ME
were they all lie...
but the strang thing is
that I still
LOVE YOU
is it because im just a fool or is
it because i truly loved you...

Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 8, 2009

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  • Seraphim Foxette (3/1/2010 10:11:00 AM)

    i want to send this to my exboyfriend. its a great expression of how i feel. i can never do things like this i dont like thinking about breakups

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  • Black Rose Dimitris (2/22/2010 9:40:00 AM)

    sumthing like this was hard for me to say also to rite, where you took it out for me it seems, .....

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  • The Devils GirlThe Devils Girl (2/15/2010 4:51:00 PM)

    i love this poem and i know how u feel believe me when my ex broke up with me my life just seemed to stop i hated him and yet i loved him. i have writen alot of poems like this one and i love it

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  • Iron Panda 23™ (2/11/2010 8:54:00 AM)

    wow! !
    not sure what more to say....but 10! ! !

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  • Shelby Alwaysconfused (1/5/2010 10:26:00 AM)

    wow, a very touching read.

    great job.

    love, shelby

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  • Shelby Alwaysconfused (1/5/2010 10:25:00 AM)

    wow, a very touching read.

    great job.

    love, shelby

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  • James MclainJames Mclain (12/7/2009 10:42:00 AM)

    when it feels like it might..
    and you think that it is..
    just squeeze it out a little more..iip

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  • Merna Ibrahim (10/22/2009 10:36:00 AM)

    Lovely piece! ! ...keep it up..10
    Merna.

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  • Vinod KumarVinod Kumar (10/22/2009 10:08:00 AM)

    Sharp responses beyond imagination... Nice,10

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  • Emma Smahlt (10/20/2009 8:47:00 AM)

    i really love this one! ! ! ! great job! ! ! keep writing! ! !

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  • Anjali Sinha (10/19/2009 9:59:00 AM)

    wow
    beautiful
    i love this
    keep sharing

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  • Amber Roser (10/16/2009 8:36:00 AM)

    Thanks for sharing this. I don't think that it is ever foolish to love somebody though, even if it hurts like hell.

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  • Disturbed angel in a straight jacket (10/8/2009 10:59:00 AM)

    deep I like it :) good job..... :)

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