Adryan Rotica


Light Wind - Poem by Adryan Rotica

...the days are long
and the nights
wonder into gone...
I believe that light
tells us where to live
bleaching away
the curse
that gives up the ghost
of white washed
death....
but the light can't hide
what I see
blowing away~



Copyright ©2008


Comments about Light Wind by Adryan Rotica

  • (5/22/2009 11:14:00 AM)


    I agree with Don, that one line 'I believe..............' jumps out and arrests the senses. Thank you for putting words to something that is so obvious but never gets said (Report) Reply

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  • (4/17/2008 8:07:00 AM)


    'I believe that light tells us where to live'-I love that line. This is a beautiful and haunting piece, well done.

    Don
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 17, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 17, 2008


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