Like A Worm In The Apple Destroys The Sweetness Poem by Mountain Pass

Like A Worm In The Apple Destroys The Sweetness

Rating: 4.8


Like a worm in an apple destroys the purity of this sweet fruit
Breaking the heart of your loved ones hurts you to the core of
your spirit and is a forever blight of purity to carry always
like a bag of tarnish loot.
Your spirt will never heal from pains you have gave to another,
unless by way of another birth you are cleansed through your mother

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 08 May 2012

I read it and i feel so good finished this, has a good idea, it is a good piece to understand in very easy and beautiful way really this poem such a good write write more! _Unwritten Soul

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Stan Petrovich 24 December 2012

I wonder what Dr. Freud would interpret this one. However, I for one, don't care because he was really nothing but a Viennese hotair balloonist. Good writing though....

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Owain Glyn 20 December 2012

Very profound, and possibly, very true.

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Barbara Nixon 19 December 2012

Beautifully wrrtten poem, love it!

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Adeline Foster 23 July 2012

Yes, expressing your feelings is indeed the purpose of poetry. Read mine – Death of Innocence - Adeline

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Shadow Girl 11 July 2012

Brilliant, meaningful write.

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